- Your written comments for Q.1 and 2 show a good understanding of what the questions are asking of you, and there's evidence of good thought about both...
- Ellie, I'm concerned that all I cann see are two posts for the evaluation so far (for Q. 1 and 2) and that these are text only?? You know that you needed to create super visual posts?
- Q. 1 - Forms and Conventions shod SHOW rather then tell. I would suggest you either do a Youtube edit (tagging / voice over commentary) of a draft version of your opening sequence to explain the conventions you have incorporated. You could also make this visual by taking screen grabs of key shots from your film, and then comparing these to key shots (screen grabs) of a film that really influenced you. Your written explanation should comment on the attention to detail your group explored through mise-en-scene, camera work, sound, editing, shot types and framing... placement of titles, etc...
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Question 3 & 4 were supposed to be marked, we decided to change it to them instead...