Assessment of Evaluation posts for Q. 1 and 2 (SJA Feb 14th)

WWW:

• Your written comments for Q.1 and 2 show a good understanding of what the questions are asking of you, and there's evidence of good thought about both...

EBI:

• Ellie, I'm concerned that all I cann see are two posts for the evaluation so far (for Q. 1 and 2) and that these are text only?? You know that you needed to create super visual posts?
• Q. 1 - Forms and Conventions shod SHOW rather then tell. I would suggest you either do a Youtube edit (tagging / voice over commentary) of a draft version of your opening sequence to explain the conventions you have incorporated. You could also make this visual by taking screen grabs of key shots from your film, and then comparing these to key shots (screen grabs) of a film that really influenced you. Your written explanation should comment on the attention to detail your group explored through mise-en-scene, camera work, sound, editing, shot types and framing... placement of titles, etc...

Overall effort at this stage (as only 2 non visual posts appearing on your blog) - PR - Poor. Please address this over the half term break Ellie.

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Question 3 & 4 were supposed to be marked, we decided to change it to them instead...

Assessment 06/02/12

Self Assesment

Assessment 23/1/12 MCU

WWW


- All four posts complete, but will need more effort and detail to finish them properly.
- Some attempt seems to have been made to make some posts supervisual, make sure you embed this work or get help doing so.
- SPAG is good, just one sp 'focusses' should be focuses. 


EBI


- You need to write in more detail for Q2 and Q4. You should write about other social groups as well as age, what about gender? Ethnicity?
- Put Q2 and Q4 as seperate posts for now, so that it is easy to see what you have done.
- 17-50 is much too large a target audience. I agree that anyone in that age range might go to watch your film, but who are you actually targetting? You cannot please everyone so who have you made the film for?
- You must state specifically what you have put in your film that will appeal to your audience. E.g. specific shots, editing, clothes, music.


Remember you will need all your posts to be supervisual, think about how you can do this. I would like you to start going beyond prezi and images, consider creating a voice over commentary or a mini-documentary to reach level 4.

EFFORT GD (for now as we are in early stages, but more effort and detail will be required)